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 Location United Kingdom Cambridgeshire Godmanchester | Had a recent shoot with a fine young lady known as Miss Mary Louise or Tibbymuldoon and although not the main idea from the shoot i managed to get a quick edit done before i flew to france, but i forgot to post it so doing it now (taken from tibbys profile, not sure why it's so small) and don't ask why she's on a TV lol |
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| Friday, November 06, 2009 9:59 PM | |||
 Location United Kingdom Devon Plymouth | Errrm, well I think the shadow from her hair by her leg is a bit distracting ... and the underwear? Nude on the bottom half whilst properly covering herself would have been a better image in my opinion .... though I'd like to see a proper res version before I pass too much judgement  I do like the coldness of the image though, it just wouldn't have worked further up the ol' white balance scale.... |
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| Saturday, November 07, 2009 2:49 AM | |||
 Location United Kingdom Hertfordshire radlett | Personally, I would crop the right hand side a bit to get it more centred. And bring the top down a bit to just above the Halo. Nice shot tho'. |
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| Saturday, November 07, 2009 3:11 AM | |||
 Location United Kingdom Cheshire Chester | Lovely, memorable idea - beautifully arranged and executed. Agree, the arm should have completely covered her but a little tweak with Photoshop would have sorted that so your eye is no longer drawn to that detail. Nice job. |
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| Saturday, November 07, 2009 3:11 AM | |||
 Location United Kingdom London SW London | I agree with Nuflo for the most part. Also, you'll need to try and clone the cable out as it's quite distracting. Otherwise, I love the concept and the lighting is stunning. | ||
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| Saturday, November 07, 2009 4:46 AM | |||
 Location United Kingdom London Enfield | Adam, big fan here, but for some reason Im not feeling it 100%. I like the grid/snoot lighting but agree the shadow could have been less distracting but I think my main problem is I think it is not quite there. Mainly I dont like the crop and composition. Its a little too centre for my liking and I just think there could have been something more interesting to it. When I first saw this image, I automatically visioned someone else work (on PS) who did a similar theme, so sorry if I am comparing your work to theirs. I also think its missing the AR signature too (i.e. something a bit naughty, something like what you did with FayeX and the camera phone for example :p) Its just my opinion, its good, but certainly not one of your best. |
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| Saturday, November 07, 2009 5:17 AM | ||
 Location United Kingdom Cambridgeshire Godmanchester |  Quote from RLI also think its missing the AR signature too (i.e. something a bit naughty, something like what you did with FayeX and the camera phone for example :p) Its just my opinion, its good, but certainly not one of your best. hmmmm really? I've been trying to move away from stuff like that :( maybe I've got it wrong what people Want from me? I'm defo trying out loads of stuff in the run up to Xmas! |
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| Saturday, November 07, 2009 5:23 AM | ||
Location United Kingdom Essex Southend-on-Sea | In general I like it but couple points I'd make: 1. Clone out the wire as said above - it detracts and the photo works better without it, nothing "feeding" the TV adds to the mystic. 2. She hiding from something and covering the TV screen - what's she hiding from I ask myself - so it needs a suitable image ps'd onto the screen to give it a better story imho. Maybe an open legged shot being hid? (I know she doesn't do those but it needs to be something to give it the AR bite!) |
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| Saturday, November 07, 2009 6:00 AM | |||
 Location United Kingdom London Enfield | Quote from adamrobertsonphotography hmmmm really? I've been trying to move away from stuff like that :( maybe I've got it wrong what people Want from me? I'm defo trying out loads of stuff in the run up to Xmas! Aha in that case, I take it back. Like I said, it was only my opinion but I would say this, its lacking a real WOW factor, something that your older images had (if that makes sense). All credit for trying out new stuff though! |
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| Saturday, November 07, 2009 7:40 AM | |||
 Location United Kingdom Devon Plymouth | Quote from adamrobertsonphotography hmmmm really? I've been trying to move away from stuff like that :( maybe I've got it wrong what people Want from me? I'm defo trying out loads of stuff in the run up to Xmas! Oooooooooo ya gunna hate me too!! I REALLY liked the camera phone set you did with Faye too. And not particularly for the cheeky-ness, just the overall execution. It might not be the direction you want to go, but this in comparison whilst 'nice enough' isn't memerable, and I can't see it making me want to go back and look at it again like the latter did.... xx |
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