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 | 23 February 2012 13:22 |
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| RobS_1 Photographer  Location United Kingdom West Midlands Coleshill | I got fed up with shooting in my studio so tried some natural light shots with Holly at my home. As this is a different style to my usual (clothed for once) I wondered if I could trouble you all for a bit of feedback. 1.  2.  3.  |
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| Sometimes I guess there just aren't enough rocks. | ||
| 23 February 2012 13:27 |
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| Jobe Photographer  Location United Kingdom County Durham | Simply stunning, especially the second one... | |
| If only you could see... www.eyesofjobe.com | ||
| 23 February 2012 13:40 |
| paulso123 Model Location United Kingdom London London | STUNNING. LILY COLE SPRINGS TO MIND. LOVELY SHOTS, NUMBER 2 IS SO ARTISTIC |
| 23 February 2012 14:43 |
| MartW Photographer  Location United Kingdom Shropshire Oswestry | Have to agree an awesome set but number 2 is a winner. thanks for sharing  |
 | 23 February 2012 15:02 |
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| NMP Photographer  Location United Kingdom London | I like them, in particular two and three. In my mind I'm also thinking how number two could / would have looked if the window wasn't included as I feel it's a different era from the clothing and pose; it's not a factor in number three as the pose and lingerie worn are quite contemporary - am I making sense? |
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| 23 February 2012 16:19 |
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| Lifescapes Photographer  Location United Kingdom Cumbria Kendal, Lancaster | Great set. 2 is fab but my eye keeps getting drawn to the modern window frame which contrasts somewhat with the classic beauty of the rest. | |
| "It's very difficult to remain calm when you're listening to someone talk complete bollocks." Jeremy Paxman | ||
| 23 February 2012 16:32 |
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| RobS_1 Photographer Location United Kingdom West Midlands Coleshill | Just a real quick edit cropping out the window. better/worse? |
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| Sometimes I guess there just aren't enough rocks. | ||
| 23 February 2012 16:42 |
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| Lifescapes Photographer Location United Kingdom Cumbria Kendal, Lancaster |  Quote from RobS_1Just a real quick edit cropping out the window. better/worse? Prefer the original actually as the balance is better. You'll either have to use the clone tool in PS or better still get Holly back and move her further away.  |
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| "It's very difficult to remain calm when you're listening to someone talk complete bollocks." Jeremy Paxman | ||
| 24 February 2012 07:41 |
| kimphot Photographer  Location United Kingdom South Yorkshire Sheffield | 1 & 2 are severley lacking contrast. All are on the light side. 1 has an unnecesary hot spot on the shoulder and hip. As a starting point open each file, duplicate the background layer, change the blend mode to Multiply on the top layer than whack as "S" curve on them. Density can be adjusted by transparency and the amount of contrast by varying the "S" curve. Posing and composition are fine, although perhaps 1 model is too low, take 10% off the top and add it to the bottom. |
| 24 February 2012 07:42 |
| BaileyK Model  Location United Kingdom Hertfordshire | I love 1 & 2  |
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