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Three new shots added....thoughts appreciated

Rob Southall is off-line
23 February 2012 16:22
RobS_1
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RobS_1
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West Midlands
Coleshill

I got fed up with shooting in my studio so tried some natural light shots with Holly at my home. As this is a different style to my usual (clothed for once) I wondered if I could trouble you all for a bit of feedback.

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3.
Sometimes I guess there just aren't enough rocks.


Paul Jobes is off-line
23 February 2012 16:27
Jobe
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Simply stunning, especially the second one...
If only you could see... www.eyesofjobe.com


Paul Campbell is off-line
23 February 2012 16:40
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London

STUNNING. LILY COLE SPRINGS TO MIND. LOVELY SHOTS, NUMBER 2 IS SO ARTISTIC


Woolfe is off-line
23 February 2012 17:43
MartW
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MartW
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Oswestry

Have to agree an awesome set but number 2 is a winner. thanks for sharing


Nigel Pacquette is off-line
23 February 2012 18:02
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I like them, in particular two and three.

In my mind I'm also thinking how number two could / would have looked if the window wasn't included as I feel it's a different era from the clothing and pose; it's not a factor in number three as the pose and lingerie worn are quite contemporary - am I making sense?

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Lifescapes is off-line
23 February 2012 19:19
Lifescapes
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Lifescapes
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Cumbria
Kendal, Lancaster

Great set. 2 is fab but my eye keeps getting drawn to the modern window frame which contrasts somewhat with the classic beauty of the rest.
"It's very difficult to remain calm when you're listening to someone talk complete bollocks." Jeremy Paxman


Rob Southall is off-line
23 February 2012 19:32
RobS_1
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RobS_1
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West Midlands
Coleshill

Just a real quick edit cropping out the window. better/worse?
Sometimes I guess there just aren't enough rocks.


Lifescapes is off-line
23 February 2012 19:42
Lifescapes
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Lifescapes
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Cumbria
Kendal, Lancaster

Quote from RobS_1
Just a real quick edit cropping out the window. better/worse?



Prefer the original actually as the balance is better.  You'll either have to use the clone tool in PS or better still get Holly back and move her further away. 
"It's very difficult to remain calm when you're listening to someone talk complete bollocks." Jeremy Paxman


Brian Jones is off-line
24 February 2012 10:41
kimphot
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kimphot
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South Yorkshire
Sheffield

1 & 2 are severley lacking contrast. All are on the light side. 1 has an unnecesary hot spot on the shoulder and hip. As a starting point open each file, duplicate the background layer, change the blend mode to Multiply on the top layer than whack as "S" curve on them. Density can be adjusted by transparency and the amount of contrast by varying the "S" curve. Posing and composition are fine, although perhaps 1 model is too low, take 10% off the top and add it to the bottom.


Bailey-K is off-lineSilver Member
24 February 2012 10:42
BaileyK
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Hertfordshire


I love 1 & 2



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