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Nicole Sarsons is off-lineSilver Member
13 March 2012 07:42
nicoleeee
Model
nicoleeee
Location
United Kingdom
Wiltshire
Swindon

Hello everyone,

I have run out of room for pictures on my portfolio so please could I have some opinions on which ones to keep and which ones to lose? Constructive criticism welcome but please only on my modelling, none of the photographers have requested a review.

Thank you!
looking for creative minds in the south west, message me if that sounds like you!


1919_images is off-line
13 March 2012 08:09
1919_Images
Photographer

Location
United Kingdom
West Midlands
Solihull

I think you could afford to lose the 2nd headshot along with 2 & 13 from your fashion section and number 8 from your lingerie section and no 3 from the unusual concepts section on the grounds you have other images doing the same job but better, I'd also replace your main image with something else( probably the danhelder blue/grey all in one fashion image or the remaining fur coat image) as these show you better.

Hope that makes sense as I'm not sure how to link images on here.


13 March 2012 08:19
bellafotographia
Photographer


I don't think your main image does you any favours - obviously you like it, otherwise you wouldn't have put it up as your main image, but it wouldn't inspire me to look further. I think we should do a shoot and then decide which of your current images to replace with mine


Suzy Monty is off-linePlatinum Member
13 March 2012 11:54
SuzyMonty
Model
SuzyMonty
Location
United Kingdom
Cornwall
UK & Europe -enjoy travelling! -Published Internationally

I like this one best. The professional MUA touch certainly shows through as added bonus.
You have a great long lean figure and this is shown to perfection here.
Like the others I say 'ditch the mono main one'...
Elizabeth Arden quote - 'I'm not interested in age. People who tell their age are silly. You're as old as you feel' OR LOOK...


B Summer is off-line
13 March 2012 12:46
thisisharmony
Photographer
thisisharmony
Location
United Kingdom
Northamptonshire
Northampton

Hey Nicole,
 
As always, I believe less is more and I think that it's better to have a select few images which are of a higher quality than a lot of good ones which lose the overall  impact of your best work. That having been said its difficult to choose because you have a lot of good quality stuff on your port.
 
Drop List

The image has quite a lot of impact small the fingers are clipped and I think your expression is a bit akward.


I LOVE your expression in this it's really soft but you have a better image from the same set already on your port


It's OK, i Just think you have better.


Again, it's OK, just not your best. The angle isn't very flattering and you look a little bit sleepy.


It looks a tad akward, the image itself is quite dull so it doesn't pop on your portfolio.


You have a better image from that set, I think the posing is good though. 


possible drop, it has a lot of impact in small, but you lose your neck and the shape of your face in it.


It's just not your best and looks like you've just been photoshopped onto a background (not your fault)


It's just not that flattering as an image


It's good but just a weaker version of the expression and poses that you have in other lingerie shots

 
You look a bit bored.


Has fantastic impact when small but when made big the angle on your face isn't that flattering


Not as flattering as the other shot


I don't think it really adds anything to your portfolio


Not as flattering as other headshots

Keepers


Strong Pose, eye catching


A real softness, shows off your jawline well and a great pose. (I probably wouldn't put it next to the above one just because of similar curve)


Good Commercial shot, shows that you can do happy and look natural


I LOVE your expression in this, I would probably drop it sooner than some of the others because in your port the light washes you out


You're WORKING this!


Beautifully subtle and sexy, also shows off your tattoo and shows you can pose


Great as casting shots so people know what you actually look like but also well posed.


Pops on yoru portfolio and shows you can do a more 'trashy' glamour 


Really nice softness, shows you have a good range of expressions


Beautiful pose. NIce Expression.


Personally i'm not a massive fan of this but I can see that some people might be and it's better than the other one


You give such intensity to this image!


On the other hand I can see other people not liking this but I love it! I think it shows you are fun and willing to go OTT to get the shot


This image is beautiful! I think you look fab and I would say it is your 'iconic' image which I assosiciate with you.


Really beautiful and natural feel to the image, it doesn't feel forced and almost feels as if you've been caught getting ready by the camera


Nice intensity to camera, It shows your flawless skin off well too.


Shows something different and grabs peoples attention. I might be tempted to replace it soon purely because the image is very soft (which isn't a criticism of you) and I'm sure you'll get better.


Nice and natural

I know the cul seems extravagent and by no means am I saying that they are poor images, because I think you look fab, I just think that by getting rid of the relativaly mediocre images you'll make your portfolio pop even more.

Hope that helps

B x
"Failure is unimportant, it takes courage to make a fool out of yourself" - Charlie Chaplin


Andy K Stratford is off-line
13 March 2012 19:41
GoldenMonkey
Photographer
GoldenMonkey
Location
United Kingdom
Northamptonshire
Northampton

Ones I would keep! (in order of greatness!)


You own this! Head to toe you are modelling in this and it shows!


Once again, you're working it and it's working!


You look stunning and you have a great connection with the camera!


Very natural and very beautiful. Great image


Great fashion image, great look


Nice soft image, very beautiful


Great commercial look!


Lots of expression in this one! Great connection.


Generally solid image.


Another strong fashion image.


Good, solid commercial piece with a good smile.


Possibly keep this, its good but not your best...


Same here, not the greatest in your port but you could keep it and it wouldn't do you harm.


Not sure about this one... it appears very strong but something about it doesn't quite grab me with it...


These are the best of your port and show you to be a very competent model. The rest could easily be lost and it would in fact make your port look even stronger. Less is more and it's often better to simply show the best then the good with the 'bad'... just my 2p...


Nicole Sarsons is off-lineSilver Member
14 March 2012 06:52
nicoleeee
Model
nicoleeee
Location
United Kingdom
Wiltshire
Swindon

Thank you so much everyone! This is definitely the most helpful port review I have ever had I will start culling!

Thanks again
looking for creative minds in the south west, message me if that sounds like you!


Scott Morgan is off-lineSilver Member
14 March 2012 08:03
Scottmorgan
Photographer
Scottmorgan
Location
United Kingdom
Somerset
Taunton

Lose these







Life moves pretty fast. You don't stop and look around once in a while, you could miss it.


Andy Golpys is off-line
14 March 2012 11:13
golpys
Photographer
golpys
Location
United Kingdom
Greater Manchester
Manchester

i personally don't like these 2




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