  | 15 March 2012 17:43 |
| Imagineers Photographer  Location United Kingdom Hampshire Southampton | Uploaded to my portfolio - From an 'Ages of Fashion' group shoot arranged by local college students. comments/critique welcome |
| 15 March 2012 17:58 |
| Vish87 Photographer This member has been reset to pending  Location United Kingdom Buckinghamshire Milton Keynes | "'Ages of Fashion" - Not really too sure what this brief implies These aren't really "fashion" shots in my opinon   The lighting is okay but it could have been a bit more creative and I don't really feel a connection between the viewer and the model but thats me |
 | 16 March 2012 04:01 |
| StNeots Photographer  Location United Kingdom Bedfordshire Potton | The skin tones are a bit dark - especially round the eyes - I think it's slightly underexposed, resulting in muddy tones -as if you've spot metered using the face and used the exposure without any adjustment for the fact that skin tones should be about a stop lighter. Fashion is usually about making colours bright and interesting. This one looks correctly exposed and colours are brighter. Did you shoot from above to make the model look even younger than he really is (remembering the "ages of fashion" title)? Your other work shows that you know to get down and use the camera parallel to the subject rather than shoot from eye level, tilt the camera and shorten the legs like this.  |
| 17 March 2012 05:01 |
| DCox Photographer  Location United Kingdom Northamptonshire | ok you have lit them competently...u have used backgrounds etc but I think they could have benefited from more challenging lighting, backgrounds and a bit of spark from the models (not always possible)...they look just about ok but not wow... sorry Dom |
| 18 March 2012 15:42 |
| Imagineers Photographer  Location United Kingdom Hampshire Southampton | Useful tips, thanks everyone |
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