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| laurajayne93 Model  Location United Kingdom East Yorkshire Hull | lots of images, looking for good and bad crtiques, and advice on improvement ??? laura jayne x  |
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| 12 June 2012 16:21 |
| Marty_W Photographer  Location United Kingdom Suffolk | In my opinion I'd remove; You with your bum out in the field (composition is out) not in a purvey way before some1 says something Artistic nude with your boobs out (the image just doesn't do it for me) The one by a brick wall (I just hate brick wall photographs) Other than that a pretty good folio. |
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| SuzyMonty Model  Location United Kingdom Cornwall UK & Europe -enjoy travelling! -Published Internationally | You have virtually the same two lingerie shots...keep one, ditch the twin of it... You have a 60's look - that's cool...love the fringe ones... Good luck with your career. |
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| 12 June 2012 16:38 |
| Vish87 Photographer This member has been reset to pending  Location United Kingdom Buckinghamshire Milton Keynes | I would ditch the following Doesn't really highlight your ability as a model  The tight crop doesnt really work nor does the jonty angle (although I know many photographers claim this is arty or fashion)  I like your ace in this but don't really understand the whole hand on head thing  I wouldn't say this is artistic, its just been in photoshop and someones blurred it. I don't think people really want to see blurry photos of models when you lack the basic shots  This isn't artistic nude, it's just a nude.  I don't think this really does much for your portfolio  These two are both unflattering on your stomach and they are pretty much the same so don't need both  |
| 12 June 2012 16:52 |
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| laurajayne93 Model  Location United Kingdom East Yorkshire Hull | thanks guys removed some that i agreed on u with looking at them closely x | |
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