  | 15 June 2012 16:07 |
| DCox Photographer  Location United Kingdom Northamptonshire | I had a great, short notice shoot with Franka. I think I was a little unplanned and I shot because it was a time window....... She is one of the best models I have worked: clearly someone who the camera just loves. Fantastic figure for modelling and is one of the most versatile people I have worked with in terms of being able to cover different styles of work. Top Model and lovely person!! I am just kicking around some of the work and would appreciate your comments and helpful suggestions 1.  2  3  4  5  6  |
| 16 June 2012 12:59 |
| DCox Photographer Location United Kingdom Northamptonshire | ooh dear that bad |
| 16 June 2012 13:36 |
| tomwhipp Photographer Location United Kingdom North Yorkshire | DCox - I'll start by being honest and saying that style wise none of these are really to my taste, but thats an entirely personal perspective. as you've asked however I'll give my views in full: Focus: I feel that the focus is off in 1 & 4 (in 4 in particular its as if the hips are sharp but the head feels soft) Composition / Content: in frame 1 I'd have removed the vase and stuff from the mantlepiece, I find them distracting from what feels like it ought to be about a semi-geometric pose. in frame 3 I find the string a bit odd - I'd either have lifted it a little so it wasn't touching the string at all or I'd have brought it down so that there was much more contact. I find the way that there is just a couple of pinch points to be odd. in frame 6 I'd have been tempted to get the model to move further into the alcove so that you couldnt see her part the shoulder - it feels as if the point is that you cant see her face but we can still see half a head. Positives: I like the general composition in 4 - its pretty basic but it works. I like the concept in 3 - just as I say above I'm not convinced by the final execution. I like the dual pools of light in 6 they feel well balanced Like I say - just personal opinions but hope they are useful |
| 22 June 2012 19:23 |
| fotographseu Photographer  Location United Kingdom London | 4 is good. 2 least fav, facial expression and lighting don't work for me. 6 is my favourite, like the composition and lighting, maybe would have been better to have her bend slightly more forward so we see less of cut off head? cheers, Will |
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