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What do you think of my portfolio.... what am I missing

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Chrissie Red is off-lineGold Member
27 June 2012 13:31
Chrissie_Red
Model
Chrissie_Red
Location
United Kingdom
Tayside
Perth/Coupar Angus

When I see - advanced - professional then read "5 years experience" I expect to see a good selection of well processed and posed images.

From what I see you are beautiful girl with a gorgeous figure but you don't look overly comfortable in many of your images and the processing in the majority of them is awful.

I think it would be beneficial of you to go back to the start, work with people who inspire you and who you think will be able to capture you well without needing to use heavy handed editing.


Belleza is off-lineSilver Member
27 June 2012 13:36
StephStephxx
Model
StephStephxx
Location
United Kingdom
Somerset
Taunton

Quote from orsoncarter
I was referring to the lighting being truly awful and the pics themselves being embarrassingly bad. I've just looked at them again to see if my opinion has changed. It hasn't. 



Steph - I've never seen anything other than good pics in your portfolio. Not only does that show that you photograph very well, but it also shows that you have a good eye for a picture and that you exercise quality control over what goes into your portfolio. That inspires confidence. In contrast, when I see a 'professional', 'advanced' model with five years experience who thinks that such awful pics are portfolio worthy, I'm afrad that does not inspire confidence.



I know you didn't mean anything nasty by it to the model or anything like that, just us girls are sensitive and I won't like those comments about my work, that's all (:

Thank you for the kind comments on my port, I am very picky about what goes in!

x


King13 is off-lineSilver Member
28 June 2012 04:37
kingnorman13NK
Photographer

Location
United Kingdom
London


What are you missing?

Well I find myself looking for a clearer indication of your figure - full length shots that do show your body line and legs would be very helpful, and without that, attractive as you are, I wouldn't be fully confident in booking, .

What do I think of your Port?

I think there is alot of samey glamour shots with similar expressions which you could filter down. You also have some poor quality images - I mean the photo - not you. They are obvious, and I wonder why you put them in. I would get rid.
The memorable images to me are the one sitting on the steps, (but I'd rather the shoes were not yellow) and the portrait where you are screwing up your face a little. These are more contemporary and sophisticated - I'd aim to get a better balance between glamour and fashion/editorial and look for more edginess/attitude/expression in your shots. You seem to be able to do it well in a few samples shown.

And try to get images of better technical and edited quality. As you are 'paid only' I would be looking for every image in your port to sing out to me. Nothing average should do.

Good luck.

NK


29 June 2012 09:56
andybramahphotograph
Photographer


Your main pictures tells me you have a sense of fun but when i look at the rest of your pictures that sense of fun has gone. Instead it has been replaced by too many similar pictures of a very middle of the road standard.
Thats a shame.
Regards-Andy Bramah.
www.photographerpreston.com
i love faces and images that make me want to see more.


JackR is off-lineSilver Member
29 June 2012 10:10
Jack_Russell
Photographer
Jack_Russell
Location
United Kingdom
West Midlands
Burntwood

Quote from Chrissie_Red
When I see - advanced - professional then read "5 years experience" I expect to see a good selection of well processed and posed images. From what I see you are beautiful girl with a gorgeous figure but you don't look overly comfortable in many of your images and the processing in the majority of them is awful. I think it would be beneficial of you to go back to the start, work with people who inspire you and who you think will be able to capture you well without needing to use heavy handed editing.



Ahhh...honesty....how refreshing.

I see nothing in your port that would do you any justice.  Posing, over-editing, discomfort.... I'm cringing for you. Sorry


Pluckphotography is off-lineSilver Member
29 June 2012 11:51
Pluckphotography
Photographer
Pluckphotography
Location
United Kingdom
Essex
Chelmsford

I agree with most of whats already been said, but judging by the blurb on your page you're getting a lot of regular work already! Why change anything??!!

There is an argument for maintaining a '6 out of 10' portfolio so it doesnt intimidate photographers. No doubt there are a lot of photographers willing to pay your fees, but who are starting out or learning the ropes. If your portfolio was full of exceptional work they might assume you wouldnt want to work with them.

I personally think your portfolio is massively underselling you, but (if the above theory is right) you might be getting plenty of bookings regardless.
I coulda had class...


andyh is off-line
29 June 2012 20:03
andy_h
Photographer
andy_h
Location
United Kingdom
Lancashire
Lancaster

where's these Mawson photos you were referring to? He's not usually known for sending out any old tat
www.andyh.info/blog.php


Paul Jones is off-line
30 June 2012 03:24
Paul_Jones
Photographer
Paul_Jones
Location
United Kingdom
Lancashire
Wigan

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you for the kind comments on my port, I am very picky about what goes in! x




THIS  ^^^
www.PaulJones.org



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